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There are countless ways to style legal writing. In this blog, you will find various approaches to legal writing that I have found to be effective. Take it all with a grain of salt.

I hope some of this helps. Good luck!

Pronouns

Be very cautious about pronoun use.  Often, when you use a pronoun instead of the actual noun that you are replacing, the meaning of your statement becomes thoroughly obscured.  Whenever you are unsure as to whether the use of a pronoun will make your writing too vague or confusing, the safest bet is to use the actual noun instead, even if that means that your writing will be somewhat repetitive.

For example, "Ms. Jones told Ms. Smith about her plans, and then she hurried to the scene of the crime." This sentence does not clearly convey who hurried to the scene of the crime.  For that reason, using "she" rather than the name of the person who hurried to the scene of the crime is a bad idea.

Per usual, the Purdue Online Writing Lab has decent advice regarding pronoun use.